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98 - puzzle

stock images:
background:
woman:

program: microsoft picture it premium 10
time: 3 hours

comments: umm i've never done anything like this before. so this is my first. so be nice, but i'd like a critique please.

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:iconfreak-on-a-leash666:
I commented, yet it screwed up when I tried. >.< Let me try again.

I like it. It's a very beautiful picture! ONLY thing I think doesn't belong is the picture to the left. You used it three times, and it was beautiful there, but the fourth one looks over done. I think it'd flow better if it was something like a woman trying to wrap around it. Am I making scense?
:icontillytilly:
I think the woman up the side of the pillar works really well. Maybe even the best...

But I do agree with Freak-On-A-Leash666 that that image does look a bit overdone maybe..

I've never tried anything like this before, so I feel like the wrong sort of person to be giving a critique or whatever, but I think you've done Really well and I like it ^___^

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:iconthejuliatheory:
thanks for the favourite! and for the critique, i'll be changing some more stuff around tomorrow, so thanks for the ideas!! i'll definetly use them.

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:iconthejuliatheory:
hmm i do know what you mean... but i'm not sure how to make her wrap around. do you have any ideas as to how i'd do that?
i like the woman's position the pillar more than i like the three in the row in the middle of the hallway... so i want to definetly keep a woman vertical in the photograph, somewhere.
thanks for all the help, i'll be working on it more tomorrow, so i'll post an update!

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:iconchristines-life:
so, i'm looking at this again, because i feel like i didn't help you much.

i think the repetition of the same image is a bit much. maybe change it up a bit with a different image? and the shadows are still bothing me.

but i like the idea of some colour. it looks neat, with some tweaking, it will look wicked

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:iconunder3foldingstars:
totally interesting.. great concept...

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:iconthejuliatheory:
thanks, i think i'll try to work with the lighting... thing is i dont use photoshop, so my lighting tools are limited.
but thanks for the critique! xo

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my gallery | ~deviousbands

rock on.*
:iconchristines-life:
ick, you should use photoshop. its the shiz
and welcome

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:icontillytilly:
you're welcome! and good luck! ^^

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So confused... when you're lost in the groove

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